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Early Review of draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-03

Request Review of draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Early Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2016-09-26
Requested 2016-09-14
Authors Dave Thaler
I-D last updated 2016-09-26
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -04 by Paul Kyzivat
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Benjamin Kaduk
Intdir Early review of -03 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Intdir Early review of -03 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Ron Bonica
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen
State Completed
Review review-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-03-intdir-early-korhonen-2016-09-26
Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 04)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-09-26
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Document: draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-03

Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen

Review Date: 9/22/2016

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IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

1) Page 4 first paragraph states it takes a year to scan 26 bit of id space.
Even if the math is given in the next paragraph it is not clear what are the
assumptions to number of devices per link. I take it is one device on that link.

2) Page 5 table has "6 or ???" for NFC.. it would be good to either replace
"???" with something meaningful or explain why "???".