Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03
review-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-02-19-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2013-01-29 | |
Requested | 2013-01-17 | |
Authors | Fernando Gont | |
I-D last updated | 2013-02-19 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Meral Shirazipour
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Genart Telechat review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Tsvdir Last Call review of -03 by Allison Mankin (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 05) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2013-02-19 |
review-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-02-19-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please resolve these nits along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-01-29 IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-29 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard. Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: [Page 3], Section 1, paragraph 2, sentence 2 --suggestion--> Refer to "[RFC3971]" when SEND is being mentioned the first time.(even though mentioned in abstract) [Page 6], paragraph 3, --suggestion--> put "(CPA)" right after "Certification Path Advertisement messages" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com