Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc6724-update-18
review-ietf-6man-rfc6724-update-18-tsvart-lc-tuexen-2025-04-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc6724-update
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 21)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2025-04-02
Requested 2025-03-12
Authors Nick Buraglio , Tim Chown , Jeremy Duncan
I-D last updated 2025-06-23 (Latest revision 2025-06-23)
Completed reviews Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -18 by Michael Tüxen (diff)
Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -18 by Vladimír Čunát (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -19 by Niclas Comstedt (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -18 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -18 by Ned Smith (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -20 by Jim Reid (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Michael Tüxen
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-6man-rfc6724-update by Transport Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/s6PKB558dqyqSt-ejzTEuUiV0v8
Reviewed revision 18 (document currently at 21)
Result Ready
Completed 2025-04-02
review-ietf-6man-rfc6724-update-18-tsvart-lc-tuexen-2025-04-02-00
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From a transport perspective, this document is ready.

It might increase readability, if the acronyms ULA and GUA could be expanded
on their first usage in the abstract.