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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-11
review-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-11-intdir-lc-bernardos-2024-11-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2024-11-01
Requested 2024-10-15
Requested by Mahesh Jethanandani
Authors Owen Friel , Rifaat Shekh-Yusef , Michael Richardson
I-D last updated 2024-11-04
Completed reviews Intdir Last Call review of -11 by Carlos J. Bernardos
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Mike Ounsworth
Rtgdir Last Call review of -11 by Russ White
Comments
The document describes several security mechanisms w.r.t. to CA and TLS that need to be evaluated.

It also describes HTTP methods and error codes that should be examined. To the IoT Directorate as this relates to IoT devices.

The rest of the reviews are to make sure we have not missed anything. And thanks to the directorates for all your help.
Assignment Reviewer Carlos J. Bernardos
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud by Internet Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/j4jAI6RXzbmZHduYCykFbhwPMqk
Reviewed revision 11
Result Ready
Completed 2024-11-04
review-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-11-intdir-lc-bernardos-2024-11-04-00
I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area
Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just
like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve
them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more
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Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as NO
OBJECTION.

The document is well written and I haven’t found any Internet related issue nor
aspect that needs to be clarified.

Thanks,

Carlos