Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02
review-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02-genart-lc-davies-2016-09-19-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2016-09-22 | |
Requested | 2016-09-09 | |
Authors | Christer Holmberg | |
I-D last updated | 2016-09-19 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -02
by Elwyn B. Davies
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Scott G. Kelly (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Rick Casarez (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Elwyn B. Davies |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 02 (document currently at 06) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2016-09-19 |
review-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02-genart-lc-davies-2016-09-19-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> ;. Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02.txt Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2016/09/15 IETF LC End Date: 2016/09/22 IESG Telechat date: (if known) - Summary: Ready (apart from a tiny bit of pedantry). Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: s3.1: It is a bit pedantic, but 'to be sure, to be sure', add new first line: In the rest of this section references to Sections 4 and 8 are to sections in [RFC 5761]. s3.1: Maybe s/OLD TEXT/EXISTING TEXT/ and s/NEW TEXT/REPLACEMENT TEXT/ s5: s/specifcation/specification/ (sorreee!) Sent from Samsung tablet.