Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-09
review-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-09-opsdir-lc-martinez-2017-04-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-04-20
Requested 2017-04-06
Authors David Singer , HariKishan Desineni , Roni Even
I-D last updated 2017-04-20
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Carlos M. Martínez (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Liang Xia (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -12 by Liang Xia (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Carlos M. Martínez
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-04-20
review-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-09-opsdir-lc-martinez-2017-04-20-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

With the caveat that I'm not fully familiar with the topic, I have not found
any serious issues with the document and I believe the document to be ready.

I found the document well-written and providing adequate references along the
text. Being a -bis document I believe this is particularly important.

Thanks,

-Carlos