Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11
review-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11-genart-lc-gurbani-2017-05-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-04-20
Requested 2017-04-06
Authors David Singer , HariKishan Desineni , Roni Even
I-D last updated 2017-05-10
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Carlos M. Martínez (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Liang Xia (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -12 by Liang Xia (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay K. Gurbani
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2017-05-10
review-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11-genart-lc-gurbani-2017-05-10-00
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Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5285-bis-11
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review Date: 2017-05-10
IETF LC End Date: 2017-04-20
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready with nits.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 
- S5: s/An example (this is only an example), where/An example where/
  (I suspect that the reader will get the idea that this is only an
   example.  There are a couple of occurrence of this in S5.)

- S6: s/When doing SDP Offer/When engaging in SDP Offer/

Thanks!