Early Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mvpn-seamless-interop-06
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Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mvpn-seamless-interop
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2023-12-08
Requested 2023-11-29
Requested by Stephane Litkowski
Authors Ali Sajassi , Kesavan Thiruvenkatasamy , Samir Thoria , Ashutosh Gupta , Luay Jalil
I-D last updated 2023-11-29
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -06 by Mohamed Boucadair
Genart Early review of -06 by Susan Hares
Assignment Reviewer Mohamed Boucadair
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 06
Result Has issues
Completed 2023-11-29
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Hi Ali, Kesavan, Samir, Ashutosh, and Luay,

Thanks for the effort put into this document. I'm impressed by your patience to
carry this effort for +6 years.

I do think that the overall document is in good track an its core contribution
is almost stable. No serious warnings but a set of items that I think are worth
clarifying (see the detailed review, fwiw).

* pdf:
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mvpn-seamless-interop-06-rev%20Med.pdf
* doc:
https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mvpn-seamless-interop-06-rev%20Med.doc

It would be helpful to include manageability aspects in one single section.

I'm not convinced that Sections 8/9 fit in the core document. Likewise, the set
of requirements are not linked to the rest of the document. I would expecting
some "assessment" of how these are met in the design.

Feel free to grab whatever you think useful in the review.

Cheers,
Med