Last Call Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay-10
review-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay-10-genart-lc-gurbani-2017-12-21-01

Request Review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-12-22
Requested 2017-12-08
Other Reviews Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Keyur Patel (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -04 by IJsbrand Wijnands (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -10 by Lou Berger (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Fred Baker (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Vijay Gurbani
Review review-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay-10-genart-lc-gurbani-2017-12-21
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Ch056hhNfEPqO_JzvmPUWHaQ-AI
Reviewed rev. 10 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready with Issues
Draft last updated 2017-12-21
Review completed: 2017-12-21

Review
review-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay-10-genart-lc-gurbani-2017-12-21

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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-overlay-??
Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review Date: 2017-12-21
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-22
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11

Summary: The draft is ready as a PS.  It has one Minor issue that needs some discussion.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: One.

Nits/editorial comments:  None.

Minor issues:
In S13 (IANA Considerations), I am not sure whether this draft is allocating the tunnel types or not.  The responsible IANA registry [0] shows that the tunnel types mentioned in this draft are already allocated through a precursor individual draft [1], which has long expired.  However, when I look at the IANA Consideration section in [1], it is empty!  So I am not sure how the IANA registry in [0] received the allocations.  I think the IANA section of this draft needs to be updated accordingly.

[0] https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-parameters/bgp-parameters.xhtml#tunnel-types
[1] http://www.iana.org/go/draft-sd-l2vpn-evpn-overlay (the expired individual draft itself is at https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-sd-l2vpn-evpn-overlay-03)