Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-eth-oam-ext-11
review-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-eth-oam-ext-11-genart-lc-brim-2014-04-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-eth-oam-ext
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-04-15
Requested 2014-04-03
Authors Attila Takacs , Balazs Peter Gero, Hao Long
I-D last updated 2014-04-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Scott W. Brim (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Scott W. Brim (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Leif Johansson (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Scott W. Brim
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-eth-oam-ext by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-04-13
review-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-eth-oam-ext-11-genart-lc-brim-2014-04-13-00
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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-rsvp-te-eth-oam-ext-11
Reviewer: Scott Brim
Review Date: 2014-04-09
IETF LC End Date: 2014-04-15
IESG Telechat date: none yet

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

  Nice  job.

  Obsessive copyeditor nit: The sections on sub-TLVs in 3.3 all begin
  with "The ___ Sub-TLV is depicted below, this sub-TLV ...". You should
  end a sentence after "below" and begin a new one with "This".

Scott