Last Call Review of draft-ietf-core-oscore-edhoc-09
review-ietf-core-oscore-edhoc-09-artart-lc-peng-2023-11-14-00
review-ietf-core-oscore-edhoc-09-artart-lc-peng-2023-11-14-00
I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. Summary: I have some minor concerns about this document that I think should be resolved before publication. Comments: I think this document is basically ready for publication. Major Issues: "No major issues found." Minor Issues: Where the "C_R" is actually carried is not clear. It would be good if the following text in Section 3 could be more clear about it, and it might also be helpful to show the "C_R" in Figure 2. " EDHOC data consisting of the pair (C_R, EDHOC message_3) required for completing the EDHOC session. Note that, as specified in Section 3.2, C_R is transported in the OSCORE Option of the OSCORE Request rather than in the CoAP payload of the EDHOC + OSCORE request. "