Last Call Review of draft-ietf-core-oscore-edhoc-09
review-ietf-core-oscore-edhoc-09-artart-lc-peng-2023-11-14-00

I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft.

Summary:
I have some minor concerns about this document that I think should be resolved
before publication.

Comments:
I think this document is basically ready for publication.

Major Issues:
"No major issues found."

Minor Issues:
Where the "C_R" is actually carried is not clear. It would be good if the
following text in Section 3 could be more clear about it, and it might also be
helpful to show the "C_R" in Figure 2. "     EDHOC data consisting of the pair
(C_R, EDHOC message_3) required
      for completing the EDHOC session.  Note that, as specified in
      Section 3.2, C_R is transported in the OSCORE Option of the OSCORE
      Request rather than in the CoAP payload of the EDHOC + OSCORE
      request.
"