Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-bounded-latency-08
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-detnet-bounded-latency-?? Reviewer: Gyan Mishra Review Date: 2022-02-10 IETF LC End Date: 2022-02-08 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document references specific queuing mechanisms, defined in other documents, that can be used to control packet transmission at each output port and achieve the DetNet qualities of service. This document presents a timing model for sources, destinations, and the DetNet transit nodes that relay packets that is applicable to all of those referenced queuing mechanisms. This draft is ready for publication. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Just wondering if this draft should reference existing L3 QOS models marking and scheduling classification models RFC 2475 Architecture for Differentiated services. As well as MPLS QOS RFC 3270 and DS-TE RFC 4124. Also DETNET over MPLS Data plane RFC 8964 and how this draft applies MPLS QOS queuing model to DETNET architecture and how RFC 3270 maps to DETNET Queuing. As well as for DETNET over IP Data plane RFC 8939 and how DETNET over IP Data plane how IP DS QOS RFV 2475 maps to this drafts queuing architecture to provide bounded latency.