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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-07
review-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-07-secdir-lc-roca-2020-09-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2020-04-23
Requested 2020-04-09
Authors Balazs Varga , Lou Berger , Don Fedyk , Stewart Bryant , Jouni Korhonen
Draft last updated 2020-09-07
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -04 by Tomonori Takeda (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Tim Evens (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Brian Trammell (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vincent Roca
State Completed
Review review-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-07-secdir-lc-roca-2020-09-07
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/R2xqUDWqbqy4-aINpT0OURrB_Ts
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 09)
Result Has Nits
Completed 2020-09-07
review-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-07-secdir-lc-roca-2020-09-07-00
Hello,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate’s ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

Summary: Has Nits

I have no major concern. However I think that the Security considerations section
could and should better leverage on [I-D.ietf-detnet-security] (currently it is mainly
cited but that's all). Indeed, the [I-D.ietf-detnet-security] document is all about 
DetNet security, it introduces the problem in a clear manner, then it discusses with 
much detail both security risks and mitigation technics, providing high level synthesis
tables, and sections 9.1 and 9.2 are even dedicated to IP and MPLS DetNet security. 
This is a MUST read document that provides valuable discussion (perhaps more than
in the present document, sorry).

I also think the  [I-D.ietf-detnet-security] reference (""Deterministic Networking (DetNet)
Security Considerations") should be a Normative Reference (it's currently in the Informative
Reference list).


Minor comments:

- Section 4.1 uses the S-PE acronym when refering to the Relay Node, whereas S-PE is not 
expended in the Abbreviations list of section 2.2.


Regards,    Vincent