Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05
review-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05-genart-telechat-davies-2018-10-04-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2018-10-09 | |
Requested | 2018-09-20 | |
Authors | Ian Farrer , Qi Sun , Yong Cui , Linhui Sun | |
I-D last updated | 2018-10-04 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04
by Elwyn B. Davies
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Brian Weis (diff) Genart Telechat review of -05 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Elwyn B. Davies |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 08) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2018-10-04 |
review-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05-genart-telechat-davies-2018-10-04-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05 Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2018-10-04 IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-07 IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11 Summary: Ready. Thanks for addressing my comments from the last call review. There are a couple of remaining trivial nits. Major issues: None. Minor issues: None. Nits/editorial comments: S7.5 , para 2: s/The default time minimum time/The default minimum time/ s10: I missed a third instance where the following change ought to be made (sorry): OLD: in the table at https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: NEW: in the Option Codes table at https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: ENDS