Early Review of draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14
review-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14-opsdir-early-tsou-2013-12-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Early Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2013-12-09
Requested 2013-11-15
Authors David Hankins , Tomek Mrugalski , Marcin Siodelski , Sheng Jiang , Suresh Krishnan
I-D last updated 2013-12-09
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -14 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -14 by Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU)
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 17)
Result Has nits
Completed 2013-12-09
review-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14-opsdir-early-tsou-2013-12-09-00
Dear all,
This is for tool tracking purpose to repost the early review of
draft-ietf-dhc-option-guidelines-14 in October.

The document is not perfect editorially -- some repetitiousness, but no
point trying to rewrite it at this stage -- but has a lot of good
information. It should move forward.

A couple of specific typos:

Sec. 19, para 4 first line: "cannot not" -> "cannot"

Sec. 22, para 1 second line: "exist" -> "existing"

Thank you,
Tina