Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dmm-4283mnids-04
review-ietf-dmm-4283mnids-04-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2017-03-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dmm-4283mnids
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-02-07
Requested 2017-01-24
Authors Charles E. Perkins , Vijay Devarapalli
I-D last updated 2017-03-01
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -03 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Dale R. Worley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Joseph A. Salowey (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dmm-4283mnids by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-03-01
review-ietf-dmm-4283mnids-04-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2017-03-01-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area
directors.

Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

I think the document is written very clear, it doesn’t create any operational
issues to network.

However, I am a bit surprised that the draft is “standard track”.

The draft describes the acronyms and the RFCs where they are described. The
draft should be “informational”.

Linda Dunbar