Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08
review-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-11-15-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2018-11-13 | |
| Requested | 2018-10-30 | |
| Authors | John Dickinson , Jim Hague , Sara Dickinson , Terry Manderson , John Bond | |
| I-D last updated | 2018-11-15 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
by Meral Shirazipour
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2018-11-15 |
review-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-11-15-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2018-11-13 IETF LC End Date: 2018-11-13 IESG Telechat date: 2018-11-21 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 21], last row in Table, "types are are omitted"----->"types are omitted" -[Page 21], last row in Table, "If the data type is are omitted"----->"If the data type is omitted" -[Page 22], Section 7.5, "collection and and"---->"collection and" -[Page 37], "may have be split"---->"may have been split" -[Page 37], "may have be sent"---->"may have been sent" -[Page 38], "choronological"--->"chronological" -[Page 63], "schema to to read"---->"schema to read" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com