Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08
review-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-11-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-11-13
Requested 2018-10-30
Draft last updated 2018-11-15
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-11-15
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2018-11-15

Review
review-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-11-15

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2018-11-13
IETF LC End Date: 2018-11-13
IESG Telechat date: 2018-11-21


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.
Major issues:
Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 21], last row in Table, "types are are omitted"----->"types are omitted"
-[Page 21], last row in Table,  "If the data type is are omitted"----->"If the data type is omitted"

-[Page 22], Section 7.5, "collection and and"---->"collection and"
-[Page 37], "may have be split"---->"may have been split"
-[Page 37], "may have be sent"---->"may have been sent"

-[Page 38], "choronological"--->"chronological"
-[Page 63], "schema to to read"---->"schema to read"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com