Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse-09
review-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse-09-genart-telechat-halpern-2017-04-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-05-23
Requested 2017-04-23
Other Reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Sandra Murphy (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Joel Halpern
Review review-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse-09-genart-telechat-halpern-2017-04-30
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/AjnRX8psdt-9_8RxQKxT2ySkMMc
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Issues
Draft last updated 2017-04-30
Review closed: 2017-04-30

Review
review-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse-09-genart-telechat-halpern-2017-04-30

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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-nsec-aggressiveuse-09
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2017-04-30
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-27
IESG Telechat date: 2017-05-25

Summary: This document is almost ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC

Major issues:
    Procedural - ID Nits notes that there are normative references to RFCs 7129 and 7719.  Those are informational RFCs.  The shepherd writeup does not note these downrefs.  (I see this was also noted by Jouni Korhonen, but I do not see a resolution.)

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: