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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04
review-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04-intdir-lc-halley-2020-01-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2020-02-12
Requested 2020-01-29
Requested by Éric Vyncke
Authors Christian Huitema , Daniel Kaiser
I-D last updated 2020-01-30
Completed reviews Iotdir Last Call review of -04 by Samita Chakrabarti (diff)
Intdir Last Call review of -04 by Bob Halley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -04 by Tommy Pauly (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Bob Halley
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq by Internet Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/bqFRbPqlT8gkqFAkzgSBbvHm4iM
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready
Completed 2020-01-30
review-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04-intdir-lc-halley-2020-01-30-00
I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors.
Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they
would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along
with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on
the INT Directorate, see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html.

The draft does a very good job explaining the problem space and its
complexities.  The guidance it offers for future extensions is sound.

/Bob

P.S. I liked the ASCII art.