Last Call Review of draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04
review-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04-opsdir-lc-zhou-2020-02-10-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2020-02-12 | |
| Requested | 2020-01-29 | |
| Authors | Christian Huitema , Daniel Kaiser | |
| I-D last updated | 2020-02-10 | |
| Completed reviews |
Iotdir Last Call review of -04
by Samita Chakrabarti
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Intdir Last Call review of -04 by Bob Halley (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Robert Sparks (diff) Genart Last Call review of -04 by Robert Sparks (diff) Tsvart Last Call review of -04 by Tommy Pauly (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Tianran Zhou (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Tianran Zhou |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-dnssd-prireq by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/XmDHoh1e4Al2xbgiSKXQE0jqdWs | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 08) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2020-02-10 |
review-ietf-dnssd-prireq-04-opsdir-lc-zhou-2020-02-10-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. In general, this document is clear to me. I did not see any special operational or network management related issue. The problems and requirements are well discussed in this informational document. There are some obvious nits. For example, the number of the items in section 4.1 and 4.2.