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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-eai-frmwrk-4952bis-

Request Review of draft-ietf-eai-frmwrk-4952bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2011-11-29
Requested 2011-11-01
Authors Dr. John C. Klensin , YangWoo Ko
I-D last updated 2011-11-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by David L. Black
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Derek Atkins
Assignment Reviewer David L. Black
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-eai-frmwrk-4952bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Completed 2011-11-17
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Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be
fixed before publication.

I originally performed a Gen-ART review on the -07 version of this draft in
2010; the comments from that review were sufficiently resolved in the -08 and
-09 versions, and remain resolved in the current -12 version.  I did not see
anything new in the changes from -09 to -12 that requires attention.

idnits 2.12.12 found a couple of things for the abstract:

  -- The draft header indicates that this document obsoletes RFC5504, but the
     abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.

  -- The draft header indicates that this document obsoletes RFC4952, but the
     abstract doesn't seem to directly say this.  It does mention RFC4952
     though, so this could be OK.

David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer
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