Last Call Review of draft-ietf-eai-frmwrk-4952bis-
review-ietf-eai-frmwrk-4952bis-genart-lc-black-2011-11-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-eai-frmwrk-4952bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2011-11-29
Requested 2011-11-01
Authors John Klensin, YangWoo Ko
Draft last updated 2011-11-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by David Black
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Derek Atkins
Assignment Reviewer David Black 
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-eai-frmwrk-4952bis-genart-lc-black-2011-11-17
Review completed: 2011-11-17

Review
review-ietf-eai-frmwrk-4952bis-genart-lc-black-2011-11-17

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at 

http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq

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Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.

Summary:
This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication.

I originally performed a Gen-ART review on the -07 version of this draft in 2010; the comments from that review were sufficiently resolved in the -08 and -09 versions, and remain resolved in the current -12 version.  I did not see anything new in the changes from -09 to -12 that requires attention.

idnits 2.12.12 found a couple of things for the abstract:

  -- The draft header indicates that this document obsoletes RFC5504, but the
     abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.

  -- The draft header indicates that this document obsoletes RFC4952, but the
     abstract doesn't seem to directly say this.  It does mention RFC4952
     though, so this could be OK.



Thanks,
--David
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