Last Call Review of draft-ietf-extra-6855bis-03
review-ietf-extra-6855bis-03-artart-lc-yee-2024-08-28-00

Hi all,

I reviewed the 6855-bis ver 03 and the draft has four editorial issues to fix
(fairly minor). Some texts reference the wrong section number due to a new
section that shift the numbers. The draft is ready after these fixes.

(1) 2nd paragraph in Section 3
now: The "UTF=ONLY" capability, described in Section 6
should be: The "UTF=ONLY" capability, described in Section 7

(2) 1st paragraph in Section 7
This is an old mistake from RFC6855, which I'm guilty of as well...
now: The "UTF8=ONLY" capability indicates that the server supports
"UTF8=ACCEPT" (see Section 4) should be: The "UTF8=ONLY" capability indicates
that the server supports "UTF8=ACCEPT" (see Section 3)

(3) The end at Section 9
now: The issue of handling messages containing non-ASCII characters in legacy
environments is discussed in Section 7. should be: The issue of handling
messages containing non-ASCII characters in legacy environments is discussed in
Section 8.

(4) the end at Section 11
now: Those issues are discussed in Section 7.
should be: Those issues are discussed in Section 8.

Also one nit

At the first paragraph in Section 1 Introduction, there's an extra "}" after
[RFC3501].