Last Call Review of draft-ietf-grow-bmp-adj-rib-out-05
review-ietf-grow-bmp-adj-rib-out-05-rtgdir-lc-lindem-2019-06-20-00

Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as
they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs.
For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see
​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would
be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call
comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by
updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-grow-bmp-adj-rib-out-05.txt
Reviewer: Acee Lindem
Review Date: June 20, 2018
IETF LC End Date: Not started yet.
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary: The document extends BGP Monitoring Protocol to support per-peer
Pre-Policy and Post-Policy Adj-RIB-Out monitoring similar to RFC 7854 support
of Adj-RIB-In. The document is ready for publication.

Comments: A well-written clear and concise document.

Major Issues: N/A

Minor Issues:
    Use updated boilerplate text for “Reserved Words”.

    You will be undoubtedly asked to explain why the Adj-RIB-Out support
    doesn’t add any additional security considerations. However, I’ll leave
    that the security reviewers so that they can fulfill their divine mandate
    of securing the Internet.

Nits: See attached diff including Peer Up and Peer Down capitalization
consistent with RFC 7854.

Thanks,
Acee