Early Review of draft-ietf-idr-rpd-14
review-ietf-idr-rpd-14-rtgdir-early-shah-2022-01-31-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-idr-rpd-14 |
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| Requested revision | 14 (document currently at 15) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) | |
| Deadline | 2022-01-31 | |
| Requested | 2021-12-11 | |
| Requested by | Keyur Patel | |
| Authors | Zhenbin Li , Liang Ou , Yujia Luo , Sujian Lu , Gyan Mishra , Huaimo Chen , Shunwan Zhuang , Haibo Wang | |
| Draft last updated | 2022-01-31 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Early review of -14
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Himanshu C. Shah
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Secdir Early review of -15 by Linda Dunbar |
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| Comments |
Please review. |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Himanshu C. Shah |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-idr-rpd-14-rtgdir-early-shah-2022-01-31
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| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/C8PSoiyHCCYApTLaBdsl4dW0Vp8 | |
| Reviewed revision | 14 (document currently at 15) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2022-01-31 |
review-ietf-idr-rpd-14-rtgdir-early-shah-2022-01-31-00
The document is written well. I am glad it covers the the precedence of static routing policy against the signaled routing policy. It would be good if the example would use the explicit address range to explain; (for example - 1.1.1.0 to 1.1.1.255), in section 4.2.1. I was asked to review version 14 and have not checked the delta between the latest version 15.