Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-04
review-ietf-ippm-active-passive-04-genart-lc-carpenter-2015-12-16-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-12-24 | |
Requested | 2015-12-14 | |
Authors | Al Morton | |
I-D last updated | 2015-12-16 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04
by Brian E. Carpenter
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Carl Wallace (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Jouni Korhonen (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Brian E. Carpenter |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 06) | |
Result | Almost ready | |
Completed | 2015-12-16 |
review-ietf-ippm-active-passive-04-genart-lc-carpenter-2015-12-16-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-ippm-active-passive-04.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2015-12-16 IETF LC End Date: 2015-12-24 IESG Telechat date: Summary: Almost ready -------- Minor Issue: ------------ We note that [I-D.chen-ippm-coloring-based-ipfpm-framework] proposes a method similar to [I-D.tempia-opsawg-p3m], and ippm-list discussion indicates [I-D.chen-ippm-coloring-based-ipfpm-framework] may be covered by the same IPR as [I-D.tempia-opsawg-p3m]. I suggest removing the IPR comment. It may be an issue, but not for this draft. We generally avoid taking a position on IPR applicablity (in fact, our lawyer tells us not to do so).