Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-srpm-18
review-ietf-ippm-stamp-srpm-18-intdir-telechat-chown-2023-10-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-srpm
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Telechat Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2023-06-19
Requested 2023-06-15
Requested by Éric Vyncke
Authors Rakesh Gandhi , Clarence Filsfils , Mach Chen , Bart Janssens , Richard "Footer" Foote
I-D last updated 2023-10-02
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Kathleen Moriarty (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Gyan Mishra (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -18 by Tim Chown
Secdir Telechat review of -14 by Kathleen Moriarty (diff)
Comments 
Sorry for the short-term request as this I-D has been only recently added to the telechat.
Assignment Reviewer Tim Chown
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-srpm by Internet Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/SKV0LIjATCXOgqaJzVtVxxcg7uE
Reviewed revision 18
Result Ready
Completed 2023-10-02
review-ietf-ippm-stamp-srpm-18-intdir-telechat-chown-2023-10-02-00
Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Internet Area directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document describes an extension to the simple TWAMP protocol to support
its use in both MPLS and IPv6 segment routing networks in cases where it is
desired that the STAMP packets follow the same path from sender to reflector
and back again.

The document serves a useful purpose, is well-written, and Ready for
publication.

Minor comment: the abstract could make it clear that the extension is to enable
the same path to be taken out and back between sender and reflector.

Tim