Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lamps-e2e-mail-guidance-14
review-ietf-lamps-e2e-mail-guidance-14-opsdir-lc-banks-2024-02-19-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-lamps-e2e-mail-guidance |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 16) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2024-02-19 | |
| Requested | 2024-02-05 | |
| Authors | Daniel Kahn Gillmor , Bernie Hoeneisen , Alexey Melnikov | |
| I-D last updated | 2024-02-19 | |
| Completed reviews |
Dnsdir Last Call review of -14
by Johan Stenstam
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Artart Last Call review of -14 by Bron Gondwana (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -14 by Sarah Banks (diff) Genart Last Call review of -14 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Charlie Kaufman (diff) Dnsdir Telechat review of -15 by Scott Rose (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Sarah Banks |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-lamps-e2e-mail-guidance by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/K3E4MCQgkS1UnCGNlFAAZakNNi4 | |
| Reviewed revision | 14 (document currently at 16) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2024-02-19 |
review-ietf-lamps-e2e-mail-guidance-14-opsdir-lc-banks-2024-02-19-00
Reviewer: Sarah Banks Review result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the OPS directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. First, a big thank you to the authors and working group for a thoroughly approachable draft. From the abstract that draws a reader in, through the (many) pages of following text that feel like a handheld guide, I found myself learning things. Thanks for that. I don't have structural or technical feedback to give - the draft is clear in what it covers and what it doesn't. There are some IDNITs that need to be addressed, and general editing help (missing punctuation, capitalization and consistency), all items easily addressed. Otherwise the document is ready to go.