Last Call Review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04
review-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04-rtgdir-lc-bocci-2022-04-27-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) | |
| Deadline | 2022-05-07 | |
| Requested | 2022-04-07 | |
| Requested by | Acee Lindem | |
| Authors | Ketan Talaulikar , Peter Psenak , Hugh Johnston | |
| I-D last updated | 2022-12-20 (Latest revision 2022-10-10) | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -04
by Matthew Bocci
(diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Steve Hanna (diff) Genart IETF Last Call review of -07 by Thomas Fossati (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Matthew Bocci |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric by Routing Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/ePy-xzNQUtcJPANgv-JlPU7YQe0 | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 13) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2022-04-27 |
review-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04-rtgdir-lc-bocci-2022-04-27-00
The draft is basically ready. I found the it easy to read and well written. Thank you! I have a few minor nits, intended to improve readability, as follows: Section 2.2: "..to a bunch of routers R1 thru RN..." I suggest changing 'thru' to 'through', to be consistent with the rest of the draft. "...towards the core getting diverted away..." I suggest changing this to "...towards the core to be diverted away..." Section 4 LLS Reverse Metric TLV Please expand 'LLS' on first use. Section 6 Procedures, first bullet "..by any of its neighbor on any of its links..." I suggest changing to "..by any of its neighbors on any of its links..."