Last Call Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension-05
review-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension-05-rtgdir-lc-smith-2019-03-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2019-04-05
Requested 2019-03-13
Requested by Alvaro Retana
Draft last updated 2019-03-29
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -05 by Andy Smith (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Stephen Kent (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Dale Worley (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -06 by Bob Briscoe (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Andy Smith
State Completed
Review review-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension-05-rtgdir-lc-smith-2019-03-29
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2019-03-29

Review
review-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension-05-rtgdir-lc-smith-2019-03-29

Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ‚Äčhttp://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-pause-extension
Reviewer: Andy Smith 
Review Date: 29 March 2019


Summary: 
This document is well written and easy to understand.  I see no reason it cannot be published.

Comments: 
This document is well written and easy to understand.  I see no reason it cannot be published.

Major Issues: 
None

Minor Issues: 
None

Nits: 
It might be helpful to expand the acronym "TBA" in the requested Data Item Type field.