Last Call Review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08
review-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08-artart-lc-mahoney-2023-03-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2023-03-15
Requested 2023-03-01
Authors Tommy Pauly , David Schinazi , Alex Chernyakhovsky , Mirja Kühlewind , Magnus Westerlund
I-D last updated 2023-03-15
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -07 by Timothy Winters (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -08 by R. (Miek) Gieben
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Vijay K. Gurbani
Artart Last Call review of -08 by Jean Mahoney
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Linda Dunbar
Assignment Reviewer Jean Mahoney
State Completed
Review review-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08-artart-lc-mahoney-2023-03-15
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/0oIOyvgHBvu2TmhZYKot8d5E6CY
Reviewed revision 08
Result Ready
Completed 2023-03-15
review-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08-artart-lc-mahoney-2023-03-15-00
Reviewer: Jean Mahoney
Review result: Ready

I found the doc easy to read, and I think it's ready to go.

Some terms are inconsistently capitalized (e.g., Upgrade Token, URI Template,
IP Address), and these could benefit from review.