Last Call Review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08
review-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08-artart-lc-mahoney-2023-03-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2023-03-15
Requested 2023-03-01
Authors Tommy Pauly , David Schinazi , Alex Chernyakhovsky , Mirja Kühlewind , Magnus Westerlund
I-D last updated 2023-10-19 (Latest revision 2023-04-28)
Completed reviews Dnsdir Telechat review of -09 by R. (Miek) Gieben (diff)
Intdir Early review of -07 by Timothy Winters (diff)
Dnsdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by R. (Miek) Gieben (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Jean Mahoney (diff)
Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Bob Briscoe (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Nancy Cam-Winget (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -09 by Timothy Winters (diff)
Httpdir Telechat review of -08 by Mark Nottingham (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -10 by Dr. Joseph D. Touch (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -09 by R. (Miek) Gieben (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jean Mahoney
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/0oIOyvgHBvu2TmhZYKot8d5E6CY
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-03-15
review-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08-artart-lc-mahoney-2023-03-15-00
Reviewer: Jean Mahoney
Review result: Ready

I found the doc easy to read, and I think it's ready to go.

Some terms are inconsistently capitalized (e.g., Upgrade Token, URI Template,
IP Address), and these could benefit from review.