Last Call Review of draft-ietf-mile-iodef-xmlreg-
review-ietf-mile-iodef-xmlreg-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-05-31-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-mile-iodef-xmlreg |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 01) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2012-05-31 | |
Requested | 2012-05-17 | |
Authors | Brian Trammell | |
I-D last updated | 2012-05-31 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
by Suresh Krishnan
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Carl Wallace |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Suresh Krishnan |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-mile-iodef-xmlreg by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Completed | 2012-05-31 |
review-ietf-mile-iodef-xmlreg-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-05-31-00
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-mile-iodef-xmlreg-01.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2012/06/07 IESG Telechat date: 2012/06/05 Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I have a comment. Minor ===== * Introduction: The first sentence is too complex and very difficult to parse. Please consider breaking it up. I have proposed some changed text, but feel free to ignore if it changes the meaning of what you wanted to convey. OLD: IODEF extensions via class extension through AdditionalData and RecordItem elements, as per section 5.2 of [RFC5070], generally register their namespaces and schemas with the IANA XML Namespace registry at http://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/ns.html and the IANA XML Schema registry at http://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/schema.html , respectively [RFC3688]. NEW: The classes of the IODEF data model can be extended by the use of AdditionalData and RecordItem elements, as per section 5.2 of [RFC5070]. IODEF extensions that use such extended classes register their namespaces and schemas with the IANA XML Namespace registry at http://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/ns.html and the IANA XML Schema registry at http://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/schema.html , respectively [RFC3688]. Thanks Suresh