Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-04
review-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-04-genart-lc-holmberg-2016-03-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-02-16
Requested 2016-02-04
Authors Kent Watsen , Thomas Nadeau
I-D last updated 2016-03-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Christer Holmberg
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Tero Kivinen
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Al Morton
Assignment Reviewer Christer Holmberg
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 04
Result Almost ready
Completed 2016-03-17
review-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-04-genart-lc-holmberg-2016-03-17-00

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>

Document:

draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-04

Reviewer:                                     Christer Holmberg

Review Date:                               17 March 2016

IETF LC End Date:                        16 February 2016

IETF Telechat Date:                    N/A

Summary:                                     The document is almost ready for
publication, but I have a couple of editorial comments that I’d like to authors
 to address.

Major Issues: None

Minor Issues: None

Editorial Issues:

Q1:

The Abstract and Introduction begins with the following statement:

   "This document primarily regards the difference between the intended
   configuration and the applied configuration of a device and how
   intended and applied configuration relate to the operational state of
   a device.”

I think you need to have some introductory text before that, which describes
e.g. what kind of “device” you are talking about.

Q2:

Section 3 contains requirements. However, in many cases it is unclear whether
they apply to “clients”, “servers”, or to something else.