Last Call Review of draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-04
review-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-04-genart-lc-holmberg-2016-03-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-02-16
Requested 2016-02-04
Authors Kent Watsen, Thomas Nadeau
Draft last updated 2016-03-17
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Christer Holmberg
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Tero Kivinen
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Al Morton
Assignment Reviewer Christer Holmberg
State Completed
Review review-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-04-genart-lc-holmberg-2016-03-17
Reviewed rev. 04
Review result Almost Ready
Review completed: 2016-03-17

Review
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Document:                                   

draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-04




Reviewer:                                     Christer Holmberg




Review Date:                               17 March 2016




IETF LC End Date:                        16 February 2016




IETF Telechat Date:                    N/A


































Summary:                                     The document is almost ready for publication, but I have a couple of editorial comments that I’d like to authors
 to address.


































Major Issues: None


































Minor Issues: None


































Editorial Issues:




























Q1:










The Abstract and Introduction begins with the following statement:













   "This document primarily regards the difference between the intended
   configuration and the applied configuration of a device and how
   intended and applied configuration relate to the operational state of
   a device.”




I think you need to have some introductory text before that, which describes e.g. what kind of “device” you are talking about.

Q2:

Section 3 contains requirements. However, in many cases it is unclear whether they apply to “clients”, “servers”, or to something else.