Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ohai-ohttp-05
review-ietf-ohai-ohttp-05-opsdir-lc-wu-2022-12-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ohai-ohttp
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2022-12-09
Requested 2022-11-25
Authors Martin Thomson , Christopher A. Wood
I-D last updated 2024-01-12 (Latest revision 2023-08-25)
Completed reviews Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Kyle Rose (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Sean Turner (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Bo Wu (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -06 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -06 by Wassim Haddad (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Bo Wu
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-ohai-ohttp by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/hH9P1Glw25cpRldCaGaomSTyCC4
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 10)
Result Has nits
Completed 2022-12-12
review-ietf-ohai-ohttp-05-opsdir-lc-wu-2022-12-12-00
Summary:
This document (with intended status Standards Track) defines Oblivious HTTP to
enable an HTTP client to send requests to an origin server in a way that no
single party can determine both the identity of the client and the contents of
its request. This is a well written document.

Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:

1. Section 2:
It is suggested to add the relationship with “target resource” and “Server”. As
“Server” is used in abstract and introduction, Section 2 directly uses “target
resource” instead of “Server”. This is applicable to “Target Resource”
definition in section 2.2.

2. Section 2
AEAD : It would be better to expand on the first use.

3. The following spelling are duplicated twice:
Section 4.3: request request
Section 4.4:  context context
Section 7: with with