Telechat Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-10
review-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-10-opsdir-telechat-morton-2018-11-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-12-04
Requested 2018-11-20
Other Reviews Genart Early review of -04 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -06 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Shawn Emery (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Al Morton (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Al Morton
Review review-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-10-opsdir-telechat-morton-2018-11-21
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/MLV6o4lc97nD0SaI7fqeh1GlwCo
Reviewed rev. 10 (document currently at 12)
Review result Has Nits
Draft last updated 2018-11-21
Review completed: 2018-11-21

Review
review-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-10-opsdir-telechat-morton-2018-11-21

The draft appears to have been reviewed by (someone in the) IDR working group (good).
Parts of the draft have been clarified to identify when the IPFIX components are in use.

Some grammatical nits remain, and any language checker will identify them.