Last Call Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-09
review-ietf-opsawg-ntf-09-opsdir-lc-jiang-2021-10-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2021-10-27
Requested 2021-10-13
Authors Haoyu Song , Fengwei Qin , Pedro Martinez-Julia , Laurent Ciavaglia , Aijun Wang
I-D last updated 2021-10-27
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Gyan Mishra (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -09 by Michael Scharf (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -10 by Jean-Michel Combes (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -10 by Dhruv Dhody (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/OIJxn4WUCWudi6PzcfZwo2_1lKc
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 13)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-10-27
review-ietf-opsawg-ntf-09-opsdir-lc-jiang-2021-10-27-00
Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD
reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This Informational document describes an architectural framework for network
telemetry and clarifies the terminologies and classifies the modules and
components of a network telemetry system from different perspectives. This
document is well-written and READY for publication. A small Nits, which I
believe it would surely be fixed during the RFC editor period: there are a
couple of references that have been published as RFCs for a while.

Regards,

Sheng