Early Review of draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02
review-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02-rtgdir-early-jia-2015-10-05-00

Hello,



I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as
they pass through IETF last
 call and IESG review. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to
 the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please
 see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir



Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would
be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call
comments that you receive,
 and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.



Document: draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02.txt

Reviewer: Jia He

Review Date: 30 September 2015

IETF LC End Date:  ?

Intended Status: Standards Track



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Summary:

I have no major concern about this document to go for publication. But a minor
comment below is better to be considered prior to publication.



Comments:

This document is clearly written and easy to understand.





Major Issues:

No major issues found.



Minor Issues:

Section 3.1 : Operations of Scenario 1

First paragraph "T-PE2 and T-PE3 would advertise Active and Standby
preferential status bit to S-PE1 respectively,...."

Second paragraph "T-PE3 then advertises Active Preferential Status to S-PE1, "



I guess it is typo. Should be "Preferential Forwarding status" instead of
"preferential status", isn't it?









B.R.

Jia