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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-privacypass-protocol-12

Request Review of draft-ietf-privacypass-protocol
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2023-08-31
Requested 2023-08-17
Authors Sofia Celi , Alex Davidson , Steven Valdez , Christopher A. Wood
I-D last updated 2023-09-04
Completed reviews Artart Last Call review of -12 by Yoshiro Yoneya (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -12 by Susan Hares (diff)
Httpdir Last Call review of -12 by Mark Nottingham (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Susan Hares
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-privacypass-protocol by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at
Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 16)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-09-04
Summary:  I want to thank the authors for a clearly written specification.

Technical: To my best review, this draft has considered the operational issues
in the privacy pass issuance protocol.  The error handling appears to be

Editorial: I can find no editorial issues.

Caveat: I am not deeply involved in the deployment of these protocols or
security. The error handling portion of this security protocol needs a review
by someone who is an expert in these protocols.  It appears to be correct, but
I am not enough of an expert to double-check anything beyond the references.