Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-41
review-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-41-artart-lc-salz-2024-08-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 41)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2024-09-10
Requested 2024-08-20
Authors Linda Dunbar , Andrew G. Malis , Christian Jacquenet , Mehmet Toy , Kausik Majumdar
I-D last updated 2024-08-30
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -36 by Deb Cooley (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -32 by Magnus Westerlund (diff)
Intdir Early review of -26 by Benson Muite (diff)
Secdir Early review of -22 by Deb Cooley (diff)
Genart Early review of -21 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -22 by Susan Hares (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -22 by Ines Robles (diff)
Tsvart Early review of -22 by David L. Black (diff)
Dnsdir Early review of -22 by Florian Obser (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -41 by David C Lawrence
Rtgdir Early review of -41 by Shuping Peng
Secdir Early review of -41 by Mike Ounsworth
Artart Last Call review of -41 by Rich Salz
Assignment Reviewer Rich Salz
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/J6ohieNMM3Um2CwxTi2CWYv8ZAY
Reviewed revision 41
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-08-30
review-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-41-artart-lc-salz-2024-08-30-00
This document talks about the network architecture and issues that come up when
trying to connect their branch offices to third-party/cloud data centers, while
leveraging their investment in conventional VPN services. It describes some
problems and proposes some mitigations to them. I reviewed this document from
the ART perspective and have little to say. I would expect RTG and SEC to have
much more to say.

In Section 2, "commonly used terms" was a little surprising, as I wouldn't
think those needed definition.  Maybe find other words to introduce the list of
terms?

The document does not have any of the issues in the "common ART issues" list
(https://wiki.ietf.org/group/art/TypicalARTAreaIssues), because it is at a
higher level then bits and bytes in data or on the wire.