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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-savnet-intra-domain-problem-statement-09
review-ietf-savnet-intra-domain-problem-statement-09-artart-lc-sparks-2025-01-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-savnet-intra-domain-problem-statement
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 26)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2025-01-17
Requested 2025-01-03
Authors Lancheng Qin , Dan Li , Jianping Wu , Mingqing(Michael) Huang , Nan Geng
I-D last updated 2026-06-09 (Latest revision 2026-06-01)
Completed reviews Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Benjamin M. Schwartz (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -09 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -10 by Tim Evens (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -21 by Chongfeng Xie (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -21 by Benjamin M. Schwartz (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Robert Sparks
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-savnet-intra-domain-problem-statement by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/tObK4cH2DAiHoGlrOqL4zZvmP50
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 26)
Result Ready
Completed 2025-01-11
review-ietf-savnet-intra-domain-problem-statement-09-artart-lc-sparks-2025-01-11-00
I don't object to this document being published as an Informational RFC, but I
have some observations for the group and the IESG to consider.

It's really not clear _why_ this document is being published as an
Informational RFC, Perhaps this, along with the -inter- document could be taken
together and then used to refine the group's charter text rather than
publishing them as separate RFCs?

It's hard to believe that the gap analysis here is _complete_. Rather, I think
it's trying to identify a set of problems for which there is consensus to do
some engineering work around.

If it will help make the Internet better to publish this document to help steer
the group to appropriate technical work, then do so. But consider making it
clearer what its purpose is.

(As this is an art-art review, I'll note explicitly that there are no ART
specific considerations to vet in this document).