Telechat Review of draft-ietf-sidr-publication-10
review-ietf-sidr-publication-10-genart-telechat-yee-2017-01-17-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-sidr-publication
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-01-17
Requested 2016-12-16
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Peter Yee (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Paul Wouters (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -10 by Paul Wouters (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Peter Yee
Review review-ietf-sidr-publication-10-genart-telechat-yee-2017-01-17
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/0V0Tld4yHlbwU8WlzUim9frMZuA
Reviewed rev. 10 (document currently at 12)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2017-01-17
Review completed: 2017-01-17

Review
review-ietf-sidr-publication-10-genart-telechat-yee-2017-01-17

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Document: draft-ietf-sidr-publication-10
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2017-01-17
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-06
IESG Telechat date: 2017-01-19

Summary: This specification defines a protocol for handling objects in an RPKI repository.  Version 10 gives additional explanatory text that is helpful and fixes the nits I previously submitted.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

Page 3, Section 1, 2nd paragraph before end of page, 2nd sentence: change "RCC" to "RFC".

Page 6, Section 2.2, 3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence: delete "is" before "MUST".

Page 7, 5th full paragraph: change "messages" to "message".