Telechat Review of draft-ietf-simple-chat-

Request Review of draft-ietf-simple-chat
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-09-11
Requested 2012-09-06
Authors Aki Niemi, Miguel GarcĂ­a, Geir Sandbakken
Draft last updated 2012-09-25
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Christer Holmberg
Genart Last Call review of -?? by Suresh Krishnan
Genart Telechat review of -?? by Suresh Krishnan
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Vincent Roca
Secdir Telechat review of -?? by Vincent Roca
Tsvdir Last Call review of -?? by Cullen Jennings
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-simple-chat-genart-telechat-krishnan-2012-09-25
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2012-09-25


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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but
I have a few comments.

Section 3:

REQ-3: It is unclear why this is separate from REQ-2. In my reading,
REQ-2 already covers REQ-3.

Section 6.1

This sentence is not clear. Can you clarify/reword.

"Having the header of the Message/CPIM wrapper only in the first chunk,
the MSRP switch MUST track the Message-Id until the last chunk of the
message has been distributed."