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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-spring-sr-replication-segment-14

Request Review of draft-ietf-spring-sr-replication-segment
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 19)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-06-19
Requested 2023-06-05
Authors Daniel Voyer , Clarence Filsfils , Rishabh Parekh , Hooman Bidgoli , Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang
I-D last updated 2023-06-09
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -14 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -14 by Thomas Fossati (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -14 by Wesley Eddy (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Mohit Sethi (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -10 by Ines Robles (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Thomas Fossati
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-spring-sr-replication-segment by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at
Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 19)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-06-09
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Document: draft-ietf-spring-sr-replication-segment-14
Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
Review Date: 2023-06-09
IETF LC End Date: 2023-06-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat


The premise is I am not a routing expert and I only had a high level
understanding of segment routing before reading this document.  That
said, I have very much enjoyed the clarity and precision of the material
presented and I think the authors have done a really good job, thank
you!  (BTW, I have found the terminology section especially useful to
navigate the rest of the draft.)

The instructions to IANA are concise and clear.

From a Gen-ART perspective I reckon the document is ready.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

* §1.1, 3rd bullet: s/period/period./
* §2.1, 4th para: s/may be leaf node/may be the leaf node/
* §2.2, 3rd para: s/Again note/Again, note/
* §2.2, 4th para: s/this document/this document./
* §2.2, 5th para: s/may be leaf node/may be the leaf node/
* §2.2.1, 2nd para: s/contains following/contains the following/
* §2.2.1, Replication State info model: s/maybe be empty/may be empty/
* §2.2.1: s/in a SRH. As per psuedo-code/in an SRH. As per pseudo-code/
* §2.2.2: s/apriori/a priori/
* §2.2.3: s/this same restrictions/this same restriction/
* §4: s/catalog/catalogue/