Telechat Review of draft-ietf-taps-transport-security-11
review-ietf-taps-transport-security-11-opsdir-telechat-hares-2020-04-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-taps-transport-security
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2020-04-07
Requested 2020-03-25
Authors Reese Enghardt , Tommy Pauly , Colin Perkins , Kyle Rose , Christopher A. Wood
I-D last updated 2020-04-16
Completed reviews Secdir Early review of -05 by Paul Wouters (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Paul Wouters (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Brian Haberman (diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -11 by Mohit Sethi (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -11 by Susan Hares (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -11 by Paul Wouters (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Susan Hares
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-taps-transport-security by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/vr5LWfFq9WDhJ8iTciDWIdtAg7c
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready
Completed 2020-04-16
review-ietf-taps-transport-security-11-opsdir-telechat-hares-2020-04-16-00
Greetings:

This is an ops-dir review  that looks at the operational aspects of any draft. 

Overall: Thank you for a clear and well-written document. 

This draft is well written and clear.    One minor editorial nitty-nit.
One personal plea from the IDR  co-chair(WG that maintains BGP), 
and co-author of BGP (RFC4771).   

Personal plea: 
You've clear stated the BGP issue up front. 
 TCP MD5 is bad (due to privacy issues) and TCP-AO 
is not deployed..  Has the TAPs given any thought to 
what might be  a replacement that could utilize some of the modern 
TCP.   Would any of your co-authors be willing to chat about 
this issue? 

The  very minor editorial nitty-nit. 
Would you please check the order of the items in 
the pre-shared key import (PSKI) [p. 13-14] 
to see that it is the same order as the table.