Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis-05
review-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis-05-genart-lc-brim-2014-06-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-06-30
Requested 2014-06-16
Authors Martin Duke , Robert T. Braden , Wesley Eddy , Ethan Blanton , Alexander Zimmermann
I-D last updated 2014-06-25
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Scott W. Brim (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Scott W. Brim (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Matt Lepinski (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Scott W. Brim
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-06-25
review-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis-05-genart-lc-brim-2014-06-25-00
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Document:

draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis-05

Reviewer: Scott Brim

Review Date: 2014-06-24

IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-30

IESG Telechat date: not yet

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC.

Nits/editorial comments:

I strongly encourage you to make the title of section 3 be "Strongly Encouraged
Enhancements", not "Strong Encouraged". :-)

Scott