Last Call Review of draft-ietf-teas-native-ip-scenarios-08
review-ietf-teas-native-ip-scenarios-08-tsvart-lc-bonaventure-2019-09-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-teas-native-ip-scenarios
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2019-09-13
Requested 2019-08-30
Authors Aijun Wang, Xiaohong Huang, Caixia Qou, Zhenqiang Li, Penghui Mi
Draft last updated 2019-09-27
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Loa Andersson (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Aanchal Malhotra (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Wassim Haddad (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -08 by Olivier Bonaventure (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Olivier Bonaventure
State Completed
Review review-ietf-teas-native-ip-scenarios-08-tsvart-lc-bonaventure-2019-09-27
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/-tWE1wZvLlhXycCGCJdQ8qAYPBM
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 12)
Review result Not Ready
Review completed: 2019-09-27

Review
review-ietf-teas-native-ip-scenarios-08-tsvart-lc-bonaventure-2019-09-27

This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
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This draft is an unusual draft since it describes simulation results for a technology that is described in other drafts. From the transport area viewpoint, I do not see any specific point to report about this draft.

However, as a researcher with some knowledge of traffic engineering techniques, I'm surprised by the content of the draft. It is unusual for the IETF to publish drafts that describe simulation results. Such results are typically presented at scientific conference or published in journals and are peer-reviewed. Unfortunately, this draft does not provide results that validate the performance of the proposed technique from a traffic engineering viewpoint.

I have two main concerns about the overall content of the draft.

First, there is no discussion on how the proposed technique would react to link or node failures although these events are key in many networks. 

Second, there is no detailed explanation on how the simulation has been conducted in terms of traffic matrix, link capacities, ... The graphs provide a comparison between OSPF and the proposed solution, but the draft does not explain how the OSPF weights have been computed while there are many techniques in the literature and in production networks that tune the OSPF weights for traffic engineering purposes. Ignoring these existing techniques is misleading.

I do not consider that this draft brings useful information about the technology described in the companion documents.