Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tls-external-psk-importer-05
review-ietf-tls-external-psk-importer-05-opsdir-lc-morton-2020-10-10-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tls-external-psk-importer |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2020-10-15 | |
| Requested | 2020-10-01 | |
| Authors | David Benjamin , Christopher A. Wood | |
| I-D last updated | 2020-10-10 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05
by Brian E. Carpenter
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Al Morton (diff) Artart Telechat review of -07 by Darrel Miller (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Al Morton |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-tls-external-psk-importer by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/4tSLzf17fcvQDgwwe7MTRLtgIPA | |
| Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 08) | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2020-10-10 |
review-ietf-tls-external-psk-importer-05-opsdir-lc-morton-2020-10-10-00
OPS-DIR Review of: Importing External PSKs for TLS draft-ietf-tls-external-psk-importer-05 Note that Brian Carpenter provided a useful review for GEN-ART, far beyond general questions. Brian's comments on Section 6, Incremental Deployment, are relevant to operational considerations, which are the focus of this review. The draft provides a useful capability and considers possible issues stemming from interaction with (D)TLS 1.2. There are some implementations and other parties are interested. Nits: Intro:not expanded on first use PRF KDF 3.1 Terminology: one-too-many "and" in: ... * Imported PSK (IPSK): A PSK derived from an EPSK, External Identity, optional context string, and target protocol and KDF.