Last Call Review of draft-ietf-uta-email-tls-certs-05
review-ietf-uta-email-tls-certs-05-secdir-lc-montville-2015-12-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-uta-email-tls-certs
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2015-12-04
Requested 2015-11-26
Authors Alexey Melnikov
I-D last updated 2015-12-03
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Adam W. Montville (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Bert Wijnen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Adam W. Montville
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-uta-email-tls-certs by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 09)
Result Has nits
Completed 2015-12-03
review-ietf-uta-email-tls-certs-05-secdir-lc-montville-2015-12-03-00
Hi.

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

This draft is ready with one nit.

Nit: Fix plurality or possession in first sentence of last paragraph on Page 3,
which presently reads: “The rules and guidelines defined in [RFC6125] apply to
an email server certificates…”  This could be: “...apply to an email server’s
certificates...”, “...apply to an email server certificate...”, or “...apply to
email server certificates…”

Kind regards,

Adam