Last Call Review of draft-ietf-uta-email-tls-certs-05
review-ietf-uta-email-tls-certs-05-secdir-lc-montville-2015-12-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-uta-email-tls-certs
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2015-12-04
Requested 2015-11-26
Authors Alexey Melnikov
Draft last updated 2015-12-03
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Adam Montville (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Bert Wijnen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Adam Montville 
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-uta-email-tls-certs-05-secdir-lc-montville-2015-12-03
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 09)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2015-12-03

Review
review-ietf-uta-email-tls-certs-05-secdir-lc-montville-2015-12-03

Hi.

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This draft is ready with one nit.

Nit: Fix plurality or possession in first sentence of last paragraph on Page 3, which presently reads: “The rules and guidelines defined in [RFC6125] apply to an email server certificates…”  This could be: “...apply to an email server’s certificates...”, “...apply to an email server certificate...”, or “...apply to email server certificates…”

Kind regards,

Adam