Telechat Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-05
review-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-05-tsvart-telechat-nishida-2018-07-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2018-07-31
Requested 2018-07-04
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Yoshifumi Nishida
Review review-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-05-tsvart-telechat-nishida-2018-07-11
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/fs2u4zOYo1FYX94lLKgaJhSAD9Y
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-07-11
Review completed: 2018-07-11

Review
review-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-05-tsvart-telechat-nishida-2018-07-11

Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-05
Reviewer: Yoshifumi Nishida

I've reviewed this document as part of TSV-ART's ongoing effort to review
key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport
area directors, but are copied to the document's authors for their
information and to allow them to address any issues raised. Please always
CC tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review.

Summary: This document is ready for publication.

- Major Issues: None.

- Minor Issues:

  Typos:

  Page 6:
       (Stateless Address Autoconfiguration, [RFC4682]
          ->
       (Stateless Address Autoconfiguration, [RFC4682])

       (by sending an RA with the preferred_lifetime set to 0 in the
corresponding PIO (Prefix Information option, [RFC4861])
          ->
        (by sending an RA with the preferred_lifetime set to 0 in the
corresponding PIO (Prefix Information option, [RFC4861]))

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Yoshi