Last Call Review of draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05
review-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05-genart-lc-yee-2013-07-08-00
Request | Review of | draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2013-07-17 | |
Requested | 2013-06-20 | |
Authors | Joe Abley | |
I-D last updated | 2013-07-08 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Peter E. Yee
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Genart Last Call review of -05 by Peter E. Yee (diff) Genart Telechat review of -05 by Peter E. Yee (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Sandra L. Murphy (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Peter E. Yee |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 07) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2013-07-08 |
review-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05-genart-lc-yee-2013-07-08-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: July-07-2013 IETF LC End Date: July-17-2013 IESG Telechat date: August-15-2013 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits] This draft defines DNS Resources Record Types for encoding IEEE 802 EUI-48 and EUI-64 addresses. Potential privacy issues with this scheme have been soundly beaten to death with extreme prejudice. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits: Page 1, Abstract, 1st paragraph: After "e.g.", append a comma and delete an extraneous space before "Ethernet". Page 3, Introduction, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "This" to "These" and change "specification defines" to "specifications define". Page 3, Introduction, 2nd paragraph: append a comma after "e.g.". -Peter Yee